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Re: Hiding, Trying, and Tears
thanks. and yeah. i agree. it wasnt one of my best poems. but i didnt want to put on a really long one first time, so i went with this ...
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Re: Hiding, Trying, and Tears
hey you guys, this is my first time putting my stuff on here, so tell me what you think. i dont mind critisism, as long as youre not doing it ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Water and Glass
for someone who claims to have never written poetry before, that was really good. but what does it mean? every time i was reading it i kept on thinking that ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Blue Lightning's Light
i really liked this. but i have a few questions about the words you used in the.....fourth stanza, what does vivacious mean? and then in teh second-to-last one, does eulogies ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: In a Sea Shell
this was sweet. i liked it a lot. it had so much emotion in it.....
Mar 23, 2009
